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animecrazy71
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Shadows in the dark,
Presence just as stark,

Like Needle in a hay stack,
Stormy night, Broken Shack,

A lavish bar,of a hotel,
Sits a drink-less bottle,

Sits a lonely black jack,
In a faceless card stack,

Friendship is a lone ship to me,
A drowning ship in the open sea,

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Chavo.wavo
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I loved this.the words jumped straight through my eyes and hit me in the heart. I can feel the emotion it took to write this. Beautiful work.
XGarapanX
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This produces a great effect in the reader. Powerfully done.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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