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lilly
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since 2010-11-06
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0 posted 2010-11-06 07:24 AM



i like icecream
it tastes nice
i eat it once
i eat it twice
icecream makes me happy
when i am sad
i dont get any icecream
when im bad
icecream!

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Earl Brinkman
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1 posted 2010-11-06 08:50 AM


Cute!!!!!
madelyn
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2 posted 2010-11-06 06:28 PM


Welcome to piptalk Lilly.
I really liked the poem.  It is very funny.
Well done.

M

And now I lay me down to sleep, I pray the lord my soul to keep. And if I die before I wake, I pray the lord my soul to take.

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3 posted 2010-11-07 03:38 PM


Welcome to Passions love this poem, it is different and very carefree. hold onto that..
Krysti

FloraScars
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4 posted 2010-12-08 12:44 PM


aww i like the care free like attitude in this poem!
cute(:

"Love is a dance. Some have it easy and others struggle."

XGarapanX
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5 posted 2011-01-02 05:48 AM


I...

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Sunshine
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6 posted 2011-01-02 07:26 PM


Charming Lilly...
please check your email
for a Very Special Message!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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