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I Love You??

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rebelrea
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since 10-22-2010
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Michigan, USA


0 posted 10-24-2010 04:07 PM       View Profile for rebelrea   Email rebelrea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelrea

I actually wrote this around 7th grade XD, but that doesn't mean it wasn't true....


You say I love you, but do you mean it?
It makes me think, should I really believe it?
You say that I change you
but I don’t think I really do
I’m supposed to be your girl
apparently you whole world
 
But aren’t you just playing me
like with every other one you called baby?
Your just the same as every other guy
the ones I couldn’t stand to call mine
Mean, over controlling freaks
who think us “perfect” girls need tweaks
 
I won’t walk to your house everyday
no matter what you try to say
I won’t hold your hand
just to upset someone you can’t stand
I won’t hug you when you leave
just so you can try to believe
all the lies you’ve been telling me
 
You say I love you, but you don’t mean it
I never should have thought if I believe it
You never really changed
your always the same
And if I ever did say it back, I love you
then I would be lying too

~RMB~
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Amberzlynnc
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since 08-24-2010
Posts 227
New Jersey


1 posted 11-02-2010 03:39 AM       View Profile for Amberzlynnc   Email Amberzlynnc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Amberzlynnc's Home Page   View IP for Amberzlynnc

I'm very glad to read that you're learning early how to pick out the boys who use those three words with ease.. smart girl!
XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


2 posted 01-05-2011 08:09 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

I enjoyed the perceptive insight in one so young. But you are an amazing creature after all, aren't you? I commented on your awesome poem in the mains, so this is my second view of your talent. It has only grown, and can only keep growing. Rock on, chica!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

 
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