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animecrazy71
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since 2010-10-01
Posts 16
Pakistan

0 posted 2010-10-22 04:02 PM


Oh!, beautiful rain,
Here you are again,

Using clouds to sing your sermon,
I wonder, whether a good or bad omen,


You make sounds, with clouds, big and small,
Incomprehensible sound, but heard by all,


Your wind sweeps through every through every window and corner,
You are forever boundless, from race, culture, and border,


With cold water, you catch our attention, and bring us out,
Trying to convey your message, you shout and shout,


But, all you get are amazed faces,
Faces oblivious to your messages,


With wind in my face, drops in my hair, and your sound in my ears,
I wonder, how and why?, your message has been unheard of for many years,


Regardless, what we all wish for,
is that you will visit us once more,


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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-05 08:00 PM


This totally rocks. Awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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