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Almost Everything I Wish I'd Said The Last Time I Saw You..

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RevengeIsMine
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Australia


0 posted 10-22-2010 07:19 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine


Sit down with me before you go..
itís hard for you, babe i know..
But i donít know when iíll see you again,
And itsgonna getlonely...

See youíd be foolish if you stayed here now
Maybe if you leave we could work this out
Cause the city only breaks you down
And it gets you lonely...

Truth is that iíll let you go
All these words youíll never know
Now youíre gone, without a trace
And it gets lonely...

I wished you missed me like i missed you
Loved me, like i loved you too
But the only broken heart is mine
And it gets lonely..

Donít forget to remember me
And all the things we used to be
Iíll sit here and write this rhyme
Cause iím far too lonely..


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hunnie_girl
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since 06-18-2006
Posts 2539
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1 posted 11-07-2010 03:46 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Jess, beautiful poem. good to see you're still writing. keep it up
Krysti
XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


2 posted 01-05-2011 08:27 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Yes, this is beautiful indeed. I read this to myself with an Australian accent and it still made sense and everything. Great poem. :p

∑ī~`∑≠ĽGarapanę≠∑ī~`∑  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"
Cat Like Thief
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since 10-18-2011
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3 posted 10-20-2011 12:15 AM       View Profile for Cat Like Thief   Email Cat Like Thief   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Cat Like Thief

Jess! i miss you. your still great as ever. need to talk to you!!


--Keagan!
maddorani
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since 11-18-2007
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houston,tx


4 posted 10-25-2011 11:13 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

sooo amazing
voice2bheard
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since 10-19-2007
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5 posted 05-27-2012 08:57 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This was very beautiful an amazing poem something I can really relate to as well!

Kate_Mcfee (Lily's Mom)

priyanka
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Posts 212
india


6 posted 06-08-2012 03:33 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

its jus too good...
I've bin there... the uncertainity of tommorrow but the heart wants what it wants isnt it. well put... beautiful
LittleBird
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7 posted 07-17-2012 11:45 AM       View Profile for LittleBird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleBird

Hi again RevengeIsMine, I used to post under RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed but it has been so long that I have forgotten my email and password . . .


Anyways, I loved this poem! I miss reading your stuff. Loneliness, I know that feeling.

-Kate
 
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