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Merry Working Song

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Earl Robertson
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since 01-21-2008
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0 posted 10-18-2010 10:01 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Earl Robertson

I didnít want to play the prince
Or to sing that sappy love song

Didnít want to dance with
The birds and the bees

Didnít want to run from
The capricious trees

I wanted into the fairytale
I wanted into the life

I wanted to hear you forever
To smile and keep you from strife

Just a dwarf
Thatís all Iíll be

Just a dwarf
Is all youíll see

So read me into your fairytale
Dance to my working song

Hi Ho
hi ho
heads high and off we go

Discipline is remembering what you want.
-David Cambell

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XGarapanX
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1 posted 01-05-2011 08:04 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

I really enjoyed this piece. I think that one of the challenges of writing, though, is to endeavor to say some of the these things in different ways from the ordinary. But all in all it was a really good poem. Thanks!

∑ī~`∑≠ĽGarapanę≠∑ī~`∑  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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