I really enjoyed this piece. I think that one of the challenges of writing, though, is to endeavor to say some of the these things in different ways from the ordinary. But all in all it was a really good poem. Thanks!
∑ī~`∑≠ĽGarapanę≠∑ī~`∑ "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"