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sammy9698
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0 posted 10-16-2010 04:52 PM       View Profile for sammy9698   Email sammy9698   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sammy9698

I'll stay with your forever and always.. those are the words he spoke... those are the words that i cry to every time i hear them... Those are the words that pop into my head when i think of him... Those are the words of an untrue meaning...
     Why did he say them if he didn't mean it... Why did he say it if it wasn't true...
  Does he kno the hurt he brought into my life.
Does he kno the scars that are more then skin deep.
   I hope he knows how true my love was for him.. i hope he see's the tears i cry... i hope he hears the sadness reaping my voice... i hope he feels the love that is withheld in my heart. I hope he knows that he is my one true love...

I hope he feels the pain i feel...

<3

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madelyn
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1 posted 10-17-2010 03:24 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

This is a really good poem.
I enjoyed it throughly.
I like the presentation, which although it may not have been intended was messsy as this break-up sounds.

The poem was of an extremely high standard and I am hoping you write more like this in the future.

M
sammy9698
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2 posted 10-17-2010 03:17 PM       View Profile for sammy9698   Email sammy9698   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sammy9698

I actually did intend it to be messy not in normal format because of how messy the break up was. its like symbolism you know through syntax. But thank you i wrote that a year ago. and i just started writing again actually but thank you

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rebelrea
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3 posted 10-24-2010 04:02 PM       View Profile for rebelrea   Email rebelrea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelrea

loved it, went through that a lot before and actually going through it again right now.. but great job! keep writing
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4 posted 11-07-2010 03:43 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

i really enjoyed this, we all go through disappointing things in life and hurt but you'll always be able to overcome it
Krysti
DrinaLove
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5 posted 01-04-2011 05:30 AM       View Profile for DrinaLove   Email DrinaLove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DrinaLove

Most of the time they won't feel ur pain...but u learn  to move on and writing is the best way
XGarapanX
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6 posted 01-04-2011 06:55 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Wow. Ok, so you knew precisely what you wanted to do here and then did it. Doesn't get much better than that.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Sara Mikael
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7 posted 01-04-2011 08:13 AM       View Profile for Sara Mikael   Email Sara Mikael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sara Mikael

enjoyed reading it  
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