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When I say I love you

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sammy9698
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since 10-16-2010
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0 posted 10-16-2010 04:26 PM       View Profile for sammy9698   Email sammy9698   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sammy9698

When i say those three words,
Its because they are more then words,
They are bigger then you and me.

When i sat those three words,
Its not just to make conversation,
Its to express forever.

When i say those three words,
Its not out of habbit,
Its to remind you of the life you changed.

When i say I LOVE YOU,
Its to show you that you that you are the best thing to ever happen to me.
For those who have all found love
© Copyright 2010 Samantha - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
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1 posted 01-05-2011 07:58 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Aww... This is sweet and sincere and absolutely adorable. And since you encourage critiques, I know for myself that spelling errors detract from my objectivity when reading a poem. You wrote "then" twice when it should have been "than", and wrote "sat" once instead of "say". But all in all this was a beautiful first post. Thank you for sharing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"
*tori_rose*
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2 posted 01-14-2011 11:36 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

i love it so adorable but i second the spelling errors, next time before posting read over it.  but over all it was great

~*tori*~

Starcitta
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3 posted 01-23-2011 11:03 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

that is sumtin that i wuld encourage to be on a card for valentines day...its sweet nd shows ur other half your deeper feelings...i love it

Amor Y Lagrimas

HopelessRomantic101
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4 posted 02-15-2011 12:54 AM       View Profile for HopelessRomantic101   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopelessRomantic101's Home Page   View IP for HopelessRomantic101

It's sweet and touching, I'll give you that.  As previously stated, spelling counts.  So does capitalization.  
Sunshine
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5 posted 02-15-2011 08:50 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Sammy,

Welcome to Passions! Please, Check your
email for a Very Special Welcome!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 02-20-2011 01:23 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I love this. I feel we often forget why we say those 3 words. In the words of Snow Patrol "those three words are said too much, but not enough." Welcome to Pip!

-Kate

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

madelyn
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7 posted 03-07-2011 05:21 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

Beautiful poem.

I loved this!

Amazing!

M

"If I am an angel paint me with black wings"-Anne Rice
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