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*tori_rose*
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By dawn,
A smiling face

By dusk,
Tear soaked and scared

She walks through the day,
wearing a mask of happiness.

Hoping no on looks close enough to
see the,
fear, emptiness, and sadness.

All visible through her
eyes, and the thoughtfull look she gets when she stares off into space.


She needs someone,
help from a freind,
but how if she won't let anyone in?

ask her?
talk to her?
but will she answer?
will she explain?

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Prats
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1 posted 12-17-2010 07:40 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

nice poem...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

XGarapanX
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I love the questions at the end, though I rather enjoyed the entire piece. I find that fear sucks and leaves people empty when we do not reach out or let on what it is we feel. Better to be brave and take the risk than to simply die alone, unheard, unfulfilled, burdened with our own what if's.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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