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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 10-12-2010 06:32 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I am horrified at the scene
The death, destruction, perversion
Knowing that it is our past
All I see is the blood

Faces fall from my mind to my eyes
Eyes that see no more
Caught fast, stick in my mind
Remember they’re not real

But the words from the dust
They speak of terrors like fiction
Devastation is not new, but refreshed
My heart quails in the power of words

Love alone fights the specters of memory
That threatens to crush my soul


Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur)

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (10-12-2010 10:11 PM).]

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Earl Robertson
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1 posted 10-18-2010 02:36 AM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

hmmm what is this about?

Discipline is remembering what you want.
-David Cambell

Earl Robertson
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2 posted 10-18-2010 09:27 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

I've read this several times, and love it! Powerfully descriptive, near-perfect flow, definitely one of your best Kate!

I am however a little scared. Is something wrong? Your title makes this quite personal I think... :-(
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3 posted 11-07-2010 03:47 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

beautiful Kate. simply great!
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4 posted 01-05-2011 09:33 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Perhaps you've been watching some form of History or a Documentary on Civil strife and rebellion, or war. This poem is what my own mind thinks when I see these things. Man's inhumanity to man is beyond horror, beyond hellish, and it's too much to comprehend.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Jaki H
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5 posted 01-06-2011 09:30 AM       View Profile for Jaki H   Email Jaki H   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jaki H

wow i really love this! it's really powerful, and definately something many can relate too... were you thinking of any place or time in particular when you wrote this? because I began thinking of the holocaust... its a very versatile poem. Well done! ^_^
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6 posted 02-20-2011 12:47 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I have a thing for WWII. I am intrigued and disgusted all in one go.

On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom.

 
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