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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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Thoughts of You

Gone are days of rules,
And I find that I free fall
Far into the future
Far too easily

I govern myself
The open field more protective
Than the encircling fence
That choked my throat

How well I remember the nights
Circling in my head
Where we’ve walked and talked
Becoming well acquainted.

How I yearn to live in the moments
Where your voice relaxed my soul
In the pages of my favorite book
Where, together, for a moment, we were lost

I think of you, words you speak
And I wish, once again
That you were with me
Keeping me for your own

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

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Earl Robertson
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1 posted 10-05-2010 02:50 AM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Beautiful. Don't get too homesick Kate. :-D

Discipline is remembering what you want.
-David Cambell

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2 posted 12-17-2010 07:41 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

This is a lovely poem... njoyed reading it...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

XGarapanX
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This is heart warming and so very sincere. I think I needed a few tears in my eyes today, or maybe a flying dinosaur smacked me in the eye, or something.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

 
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