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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 10-01-2010 11:13 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

I've found a new inspiration for my poems  

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These hands of mine seem frail
when held up by yours of strength.
They help me up when I've fallen,
and comfort me in a warm embrace.

These frail hands hold scars of pain
from years of self-loathing.
Your hands seem tough but strong,
from years of enticing me with that guitar.

If there comes a time where I want
to run and hide, please chase me.
Please find me with these strong hands
and mend my frail and broken ones.

If there comes a time when I desperately
need to know I'm loved, please search my heart.
Search the depths of my soul,
and help me believe again.

These frail hands have been strengthened.
They've been broken, torn, worn, and used,
but now they are atrong.
These frail hands have been revived.

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell
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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 10-02-2010 12:00 AM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

This poem is beautiful! I love it!

"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"  
- Unknown

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 10-02-2010 11:11 AM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Thanks so much

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


3 posted 01-04-2011 11:07 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Love it. Always enjoy strength coming out of pain or weakness, or doubt.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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