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Stitches
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Hearts will hold to those they find
They knew in another life.
You leave a deep imprint upon me
Permanent as a star-

Though we know that
Even stars are doomed to die.
And like a star I see you shine.
You shine so brightly within me.

And when darkness comes
I'll find you, like I have
So many times before.
I recognise the lives we're shared.

And if you sleep I'll follow you,
Though your hands may be cold-
I'll kiss your blue lips
To take away my pain.

And though we know that
Stars are doomed to die
We like them are
Blessed to be reborn.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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1 posted 09-27-2010 04:00 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I loved this!  Melancholy but insightful that memories give us warmth and hope.  Well done.

Words are weapons, toss them with care.
~ Mysteria ~

Stitches
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2 posted 09-27-2010 04:21 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

:O Thank-you very much!

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

Julien.D
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3 posted 11-29-2010 06:10 PM       View Profile for Julien.D   Email Julien.D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julien.D

Ah man ! Did you feel it ? This powerful melancholy. Thanks.

Hope I'll be reading one of your new poems soon

Keep up
Stitches
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4 posted 11-30-2010 03:29 PM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Thank-you.
Prats
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5 posted 12-17-2010 07:04 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

nice poem... i also luv memories...
XGarapanX
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6 posted 01-02-2011 05:38 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Well written. Interesting subject. Reflective. Provoking. Three thumbs up (I can say that because I am a mutant).

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Stitches
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7 posted 01-03-2011 11:22 AM       View Profile for Stitches   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stitches

Thank-you.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

HolsJoscelyne
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8 posted 04-05-2011 02:48 PM       View Profile for HolsJoscelyne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HolsJoscelyne

Well done!

It's so moving and inspiring

I'd love to see more of your work!
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