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UNTAMEDelegance
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Somewhere cross the ocean,
somewhere past he sea,

Somewhere 'yonder boundaries
a light is there for me.

Beyond the sky's horizon
my mind can wander free.

So careless and limitless
to be all I can be.

Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.

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Prats
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1 posted 12-17-2010 08:04 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

nice thoughts...
i only wish dat d flow could have been better...
still i liked it...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

XGarapanX
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2 posted 01-05-2011 08:49 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This is nice, although I look for higher standards of excellence from your poetry. But it's good just to jot down simple thoughts once in a while.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

UNTAMEDelegance
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3 posted 01-05-2011 10:21 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

I know what you mean, Garapan. However, I must say, in my defense, this poem was written about four years ago when my poetry skills were... less than adequate... ^.^"

~UNTAMEDelegance

Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.

SarahJoyScott
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4 posted 01-13-2011 11:21 AM       View Profile for SarahJoyScott   Email SarahJoyScott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SarahJoyScott

It's beautifull!
This poem also reminds me of a song named "Somewhere over the rainbow".
That's the song playing in my head when I read your poem. :o)
XGarapanX
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5 posted 01-16-2011 10:53 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

hahahah! Defense, accepted, Poetess.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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