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UNTAMEDelegance
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0 posted 09-04-2010 01:29 AM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

You were the reason;
it was your fault.
You unshackled
my beating vault.

You were the boy
I claimed as "the one."
You were the moon;
you were the sun.

You were the reason;
you were the rhyme.
You were the heart
I declared as mine.

You were my first;
you were the most.
I was the foolish;
the one who lost.

A beautiful flicker;
love at its purest.
I was the shyer;
you were the surest.

A treasure to have;
a gift to hold.
The only person
I ever told.

You were the "were;"
my every "because."
You were the "meant to be"

That never was.


Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.
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madelyn
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since 09-03-2009
Posts 172
Purgatory


1 posted 09-04-2010 02:16 AM       View Profile for madelyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for madelyn

This is quite a good poem and is very emotional. I hope that you will continue this standard in the future.

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XGarapanX
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2 posted 01-03-2011 09:13 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Powerful. Awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Sara Mikael
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3 posted 01-04-2011 08:54 AM       View Profile for Sara Mikael   Email Sara Mikael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sara Mikael

I loved every single word of it......
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