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The Window Pane

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madelyn
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I see a girl in a window pane,
Tears falling from her eyes like rain.
Her hair covered in sweat and tears,
Her eyes revealing all of her hidden fears.
I think to myself as I watch her cry,
Why do people even try?
I stare at her eyes so blue,
And wonder if I am crying too.
I lift my hand and wipe a tear,
It was then I registered my greatest fear.
She mirrored my action,
And to my dissatisfaction,
I realized my best friend and worst enemy,
Were in fact me…

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this really got to me i love it
RevengeIsMine
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2 posted 09-27-2010 03:49 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

love this, it's awesome.. u're a great writer..
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Impactful. Love it.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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