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Teen Poetry #9

The Window Pane

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2010-09-03 04:53 AM

I see a girl in a window pane,
Tears falling from her eyes like rain.
Her hair covered in sweat and tears,
Her eyes revealing all of her hidden fears.
I think to myself as I watch her cry,
Why do people even try?
I stare at her eyes so blue,
And wonder if I am crying too.
I lift my hand and wipe a tear,
It was then I registered my greatest fear.
She mirrored my action,
And to my dissatisfaction,
I realized my best friend and worst enemy,
Were in fact me…

samanthabridget323
New Member

since 2010-09-25

Posts 2

1 posted 2010-09-26 01:23 AM

this really got to me i love it

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2010-09-27 03:49 AM

love this, it's awesome.. u're a great writer..

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2011-01-04 11:01 PM

Impactful. Love it.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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