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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 09-02-2010 10:52 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

I'm sorry, this really isn't good...at all. And the title is horrid. But I'm starting not to care anymore. My writing has gone down hill so much, and this almost didn't come out. But I needed to write what I was feeling...I can't hold it in any longer.



I am free falling
into the arms of love.
Feelings that were burried long ago,
are now awake and burning.

There are words that my lips hold,
secrets for only you, my dear.
There are things you should know about me,
before we begin to live.

My life before this was a destruction,
that slowly rebuilt itself.
The walls of self-esteem were crumbled,
but now they stand strong.

I can tell you stories about my life,
and how it's been changed for the good.
But will you help me stay this way...
will you help me stay strong..?

My life before you was a lie.
That smile was a pin-up girl,
someone screaming to be heard.
But I'm okay with being backround noise now.

I want to show you things I've never seen,
and learn what our destiny is.
We are who we're meant to be,
let's learn together, my love.


julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell
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Prats
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1 posted 12-19-2010 06:42 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

your way of expression is wonderful... it's a touching poem... and JFYI I like the title...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 12-19-2010 02:26 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Thank you very much, it means alot to me that someone likes it

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

XGarapanX
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3 posted 01-01-2011 08:57 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Are you kidding? This was so very very beautiful and full of wondrous meaning! Loved it!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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