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This Beach I'll Miss

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Amberzlynnc
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Spread out our towels, lay on our backs.
The day is calm, we can relax.
I'm laughing at all your wise cracks.
It's not an act, it's not an act.

You rub the lotion on my skin.
I feel your touch, can't help but grin.
You're getting closer, moving in.
Something begins, something begins.

The sun bakes down, producing heat.
Your boombox plays that catchy beat.
The waves are breaking near our feet.
I feel complete, I feel complete.

Suddenly, you take my hand.
You look so cute covered in sand.
Your lips are high in my demand,
This wasn't planned, this wasn't planned.

I move in close and steal a kiss.
I never could have pictured this.
Complete perfection, total bliss.
This beach I'll miss, this beach I'll miss.

*Amber

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XGarapanX
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Rekjavik Iceland


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I'm not sure how you did it but you nailed this spot on the hat rack. This is soooo perfect for describing this moment, and everything you did here just really works for me. Awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Amberzlynnc
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Thank you so much! You always have the best comments. I appreciate it.
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