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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 08-04-2010 10:52 AM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

I haven't posted in quite a while, and this is actually one of my worst poems, but for some odd reason I still like it.
I wrote it at the beach on a cloudy day when no one was there, it was quite perfect.



There is a stillness here
that forgives all wrongs.
I hear every movement
and long for simple love.

The air is clean and pure,
it sends chills down my spine...
and I want you to hold me.
I want you to embrace me.

I want you to consume me
like the waves do the shore.
Nothing sounds more beautiful
than the gental rise & fall of the tide.

We are the stillness...
my dear.
So push me higher -
love me louder.


julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell
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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 08-16-2010 06:36 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Definitely not your best, but I think this poem is still really good. I like it!!!!

"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"  
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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 09-02-2010 10:55 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Thank you

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

XGarapanX
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Rekjavik Iceland


3 posted 01-02-2011 06:06 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This kind of gets you in the heart.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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