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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
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0 posted 2010-08-04 10:52 AM


I haven't posted in quite a while, and this is actually one of my worst poems, but for some odd reason I still like it.
I wrote it at the beach on a cloudy day when no one was there, it was quite perfect.



There is a stillness here
that forgives all wrongs.
I hear every movement
and long for simple love.

The air is clean and pure,
it sends chills down my spine...
and I want you to hold me.
I want you to embrace me.

I want you to consume me
like the waves do the shore.
Nothing sounds more beautiful
than the gental rise & fall of the tide.

We are the stillness...
my dear.
So push me higher -
love me louder.


julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2010-08-16 06:36 PM


Definitely not your best, but I think this poem is still really good. I like it!!!!

"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"  
- Unknown

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
2 posted 2010-09-02 10:55 PM


Thank you

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2011-01-02 06:06 AM


This kind of gets you in the heart.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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