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KISS ME

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0 posted 07-27-2010 11:45 AM       View Profile for creepyhermitpoet   Email creepyhermitpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for creepyhermitpoet


This one is dedicated to all of the beautiful ladies out there
Let me know what you think!

KISS ME:::::

~Kiss me under the stars
~On the planet mars

~With our space helmets on
~As we glow of Neon

~Kiss me on a mountain
~Near the water fountain

~Kiss me on a rainbow
~In front of creepy old Joe

~Kiss me on a rocketship
~In a field of parsnip

~Over an open fire
~Filled with marshmallow desire

~At my school
~Cuz thatís so cool

~On a table
~In the stable

~On a roof
~We'll fall off and go "POOF"

~In the bushes
~Where the cactus pushes

~In a stream
~If u care to dream

~On the moon
~Hearing the wolves goodnight tune

~In the nests
~Filled with pests

~Damn birds
~If I knew the words

~I'd tell them to get lost
~Outta their nest, we'd get tossed

~In the trees
~Filled with bees

~In a hive
~We'd be eaten alive


~In the shower
~High pressure, water power

~On a couch
~Then we can slouch

~Though your father's
~Oscar the grouch

~How about this slimy plan
~Lets head for his garbage can

~Or a cardboard box
~Where lives, a wild fox

~On a deck
~Where no one would suspect

~In the wild, tall, tall grass
~Where the path of a hobo, we cross

~In the park
~Where it's dark

~I don't care
~How about anywhere
~As long as you're there
~It's time to let down your hair
~Who cares if those pesky storks stare
~My heart's beating so fast, it's gonna tear

~I'll lead by example
~Don't be afraid
~It doesn't hurt
~Though my body is frayed
~The pain feels so good
~Follow me, you should

~My will is strong
~I shall be gone
~Do, what you may
~But I won't stay

~Don't follow unless you mean such words
~Don't just run your mouth like the nerds
~Be the creature who speaks with such sweet action
~In which, you'll find the greatest satisfaction



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1 posted 07-27-2010 03:41 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



This is pretty decent...

Now, repost it without the rhymes... expand your thoughts without having to resort to the time hinored tradition of rhyming... I think you'll surprise yourself.
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2 posted 08-15-2010 01:01 AM       View Profile for creepyhermitpoet   Email creepyhermitpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for creepyhermitpoet

~Thanks for welcoming me to the site. Yes you re right I shouldn t rhyme...WHAT WAS I THINKING!!! so I got a better idea. How about I come to you next time before I go to my publisher to make sure I have your approval before my NEXT book gets published?


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