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0 posted 2010-07-27 11:45 AM



This one is dedicated to all of the beautiful ladies out there
Let me know what you think!

KISS ME:::::

~Kiss me under the stars
~On the planet mars

~With our space helmets on
~As we glow of Neon

~Kiss me on a mountain
~Near the water fountain

~Kiss me on a rainbow
~In front of creepy old Joe

~Kiss me on a rocketship
~In a field of parsnip

~Over an open fire
~Filled with marshmallow desire

~At my school
~Cuz that’s so cool

~On a table
~In the stable

~On a roof
~We'll fall off and go "POOF"

~In the bushes
~Where the cactus pushes

~In a stream
~If u care to dream

~On the moon
~Hearing the wolves goodnight tune

~In the nests
~Filled with pests

~Damn birds
~If I knew the words

~I'd tell them to get lost
~Outta their nest, we'd get tossed

~In the trees
~Filled with bees

~In a hive
~We'd be eaten alive


~In the shower
~High pressure, water power

~On a couch
~Then we can slouch

~Though your father's
~Oscar the grouch

~How about this slimy plan
~Lets head for his garbage can

~Or a cardboard box
~Where lives, a wild fox

~On a deck
~Where no one would suspect

~In the wild, tall, tall grass
~Where the path of a hobo, we cross

~In the park
~Where it's dark

~I don't care
~How about anywhere
~As long as you're there
~It's time to let down your hair
~Who cares if those pesky storks stare
~My heart's beating so fast, it's gonna tear

~I'll lead by example
~Don't be afraid
~It doesn't hurt
~Though my body is frayed
~The pain feels so good
~Follow me, you should

~My will is strong
~I shall be gone
~Do, what you may
~But I won't stay

~Don't follow unless you mean such words
~Don't just run your mouth like the nerds
~Be the creature who speaks with such sweet action
~In which, you'll find the greatest satisfaction



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1 posted 2010-07-27 03:41 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



This is pretty decent...

Now, repost it without the rhymes... expand your thoughts without having to resort to the time hinored tradition of rhyming... I think you'll surprise yourself.
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creepyhermitpoet
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2 posted 2010-08-15 01:01 AM


~Thanks for welcoming me to the site. Yes you re right I shouldn t rhyme...WHAT WAS I THINKING!!! so I got a better idea. How about I come to you next time before I go to my publisher to make sure I have your approval before my NEXT book gets published?



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