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fantasia king
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since 2010-07-11
Posts 4
grand rapids mn

0 posted 2010-07-25 09:34 PM



life as i know it would soon end
lossing sleep, lossing frinds
mom yelling at u to stop the baby from cryin
geting up late at night changing dippers
feedind a baby.

when he was here he was all i had till i
mooved to my dads now is help here help thair
and that i can be my self agine i have to say
mom never helped me or cared if me or him were around

-fantasia king


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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2010-07-28 12:48 PM


I'm sorry to hear about your hard times. I can't even imagine how hard that must be.

{~~*~~}

HolsJoscelyne
Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom
2 posted 2011-04-06 01:31 PM


So sad :/

but beautiful writing x

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

madelyn
Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
3 posted 2011-04-08 07:36 AM


Welcome to piptalk.

I can see that you have some real talent but I think that spellcheck would make your writing easier and more inviting to read.

Really good poem. I enjoyed reading it.

M

Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

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