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totalspiffingness
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0 posted 07-25-2010 09:19 PM       View Profile for totalspiffingness   Email totalspiffingness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for totalspiffingness

I know this feeling-
This eluding confusion.
It's all in your mind,
it's just an illusion

On paper, it's simple-
It's crisp and it's clean.
It's still and it's silent,
but somehow obscene

You lie and you tell me
You're happier now,
You say you have answers,
But god knows how.

When no one is looking,
Don't go hide your face.
There is no sinful shame
In knowing your place.

You are human, my love,
not a toy or a game.
you are lost and alone-
that has no shame.

-Layla Smart

"Humankind cannot bear very much reality."

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1 posted 07-26-2010 01:36 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

My darling, this struck so close to home. Thanks for the write, I love your work.

-Kate

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

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2 posted 07-30-2010 02:22 PM       View Profile for mozart4321   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mozart4321

this is all too true for many people, and many can easily relate. good write!  
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