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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 07-24-2010 11:59 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Hello all, I haven't written anything in a very long time. This came very horribly to me tonight. I saw someone from my past and this all just exploded in my head.
It's not that organized, so ignore that. But yeah, I just needed to get this out there. Thanks


A tiny teardrop falls from my cheek tonight
as I look through photos from the past.
Our lives were like a jigsaw puzzle...
in the end we fit together perfectly.

I see your smile spread across your face
in that perfect way.
My eyes long for that smile now,
but its never again for me.

There was once a time when we were one,
inseperable could be another word to describe.
The bond we had was a true friendship,
until I spilled my honesty to you.

The feelings I had weren't mutual,
and I thought I was over the pain of the truth.
It turns out that the pain was never gone,
just buried beneath the ashes of those photos.

I know you'll never feel for me
the way I longed for you.
There's more I need to tell you,
but I can't find the words.

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

[This message has been edited by Just.Another.Falling.Star (07-25-2010 12:04 AM).]

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mozart4321
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1 posted 07-25-2010 07:53 PM       View Profile for mozart4321   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mozart4321

this actually brought tears to my eyes.  well written and soooo easy to relate to.
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 07-25-2010 10:33 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Aww, I'm sorry Mozart. But thank you

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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