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Goldfish in a Box

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 07-22-2010 01:49 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed


Your jacket hangs in my room,
Like your face hangs in my mind
Sometimes I can't believe that
You, of all, are mine

The night goes on, I find a reason
To stay up, to be awake
In the early morning
I see the dawn as it breaks

I begin to understand you
But the pieces don't connect
You are a puzzle to my being
My very state of mind

How should I react to your inconsistencies?
Am I more or less remembered?
Your silly simple ways keep me stilled
But I don't know what to do

Swimming in the dark
Like a goldfish in a box
That never knows there's light or day
I go on in never ending blindness

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

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freeand2sexy
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Posts 703
CA, USA


1 posted 08-16-2010 06:28 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Good poem! Loved the last stanza the most!

"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"  
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XGarapanX
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Rekjavik Iceland


2 posted 01-01-2011 09:50 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Wow. I'm sorry if I appear harsh or brutal but this totally ROCKS!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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