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Forever and a Day

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 07-11-2010 01:01 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


So this is what it feels like,
to be standing next to you.
Waiting for the world to stop,
awed by the view.

I never will forget it,
the way we'd always laugh.
Spending time in the sun,
talking of the past.

The sun with all it's laughter,
the moon with all it's tears,
I promise to always listen,
I promise I'll be here.

Forever and a day,
that's how long it'll be.
That's the amount of time
you'll mean the world to me.


{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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1 posted 07-11-2010 02:15 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Lovely!  I hope you gave this to someone to cherish.

Words are weapons, toss them with care.
~ Mysteria ~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 07-11-2010 05:40 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

yes, I have.
Thanks for reading.


{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Octave
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3 posted 07-11-2010 06:48 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

Very sweet. (:
totalspiffingness
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4 posted 07-14-2010 11:10 PM       View Profile for totalspiffingness   Email totalspiffingness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for totalspiffingness

Aww this is very cute. You totally took a cliche line and made it seem very original. Great job!
XxForever.BrokenxX
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5 posted 07-14-2010 11:42 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thank You.  

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

*tori_rose*
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6 posted 10-13-2010 01:31 PM       View Profile for *tori_rose*   Email *tori_rose*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *tori_rose*

this is a very sweet poem u must of had a very specail person in mind

~*tori*~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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7 posted 10-13-2010 04:39 PM       View Profile for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Email s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit s1nfully_1nn0c3nt's Home Page   View IP for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt

Lovely. I can see this being a hallmark card.

-Trina.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

Prats
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8 posted 12-17-2010 07:26 AM       View Profile for Prats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Prats

Wow!!! u r a great poet... d poem is really touching...

Prats!!! :D
Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

Bob K
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9 posted 12-17-2010 10:18 PM       View Profile for Bob K   Email Bob K   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bob K



All my best, and give my regards to Flavius Belby, if you please.  Seems like the two of you are doing very well out there these days, and that makes me very happy.

Affectionately yours, Bob kaven
XxForever.BrokenxX
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10 posted 12-22-2010 03:16 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Thank you, very much. We are doing much better than we have been for a long while. =) I'll be sure to send ur regard to Flavius. =P

Merry Christmas!

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

XGarapanX
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11 posted 01-01-2011 09:16 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

I do not like gum balls either. Must be a unicorn thing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

 
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