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Alone

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mozart4321
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since 06-29-2010
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0 posted 06-29-2010 03:50 PM       View Profile for mozart4321   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mozart4321

Alone.
Alone in the dark.
  Alone in my room.
    Alone in my mind,
      my thoughts,
        my heart,
          my soul.
My conscience left
  alone.
To tear its beholder into
    pieces.
Pick him apart until there is nothing left but
      bone.
The shell gone.
His emotions boiling like a stormy sea.
Black
  To Red
    To Black again.
The reign of his demons a viscious cycle.
Piece by piece he demons take.
Leaving a cold
  exoskeleton.
    Devoid of feeling.
      Numb from the
        inside
          out.
Bloodshot eyes stare at
  white fists.
An aching heart screams in
    sorrow.

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Posts 224
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1 posted 06-30-2010 04:45 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

I loved the feel that you were able to create. The language was really descriptive and painted a desolated picture that sent chills down my spine. Hauntingly good.

             ~UNTAMEDelegance

Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.

mozart4321
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2 posted 07-01-2010 02:30 PM       View Profile for mozart4321   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mozart4321

thank you again!!   i didnt know my poetry was that good.  it makes me smile to read its praise.
 
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