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What I hate about you

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HersheyKiss
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since 06-02-2008
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New Jersey


0 posted 06-27-2010 09:11 AM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HersheyKiss


I hate it when you smile at me, I hate it with despair
I hate the way you speak to me, how is it that you dare?
I hate it when your not around, even when I'm sick
I hate the way you make me wonder,
I even hate when we almost click,
I hate it how your nose wrinkles, every-time you laugh
I hate the way you look at me, it tears my soul in half
I hate the fact you said you loved me
when you grabbed my hand to keep me warm
I hate the way you'r always right in the middle of a storm
I hate it when you say change will come
all your doing is stalling, anything but stall
but mostly, I hate the way I don't hate you
not even a little bit
nothing, nothing at all
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toriber
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since 06-10-2010
Posts 22
texas


1 posted 08-06-2010 09:57 AM       View Profile for toriber   Email toriber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for toriber

i totally understand iv been through feelings like that. very good wright

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

freeand2sexy
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CA, USA


2 posted 08-16-2010 06:48 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

Awesome poem! I loved it!!!

"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"  
- Unknown

XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


3 posted 01-02-2011 06:23 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This is so real. Very creative write.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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