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I Didn't Know

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UNTAMEDelegance
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0 posted 06-10-2010 06:06 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

I didnít know that I was lost
until you softly found me.
I didnít know perfection cost
until you then unbound me.

I didnít know that I was wrong
Ďtil you staked to correct me.
I didnít know I wasnít strong
until you dared perfect me.

I didnít know Iíd gone astray
until you came to guide me.
I didnít know Iíd run away
until you came to hide me.

I didnít know I was in love
until your eyes befell me.
I didnít know that I could love
until you gently held me.


Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

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toriber
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1 posted 06-17-2010 11:51 AM       View Profile for toriber   Email toriber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for toriber

wow once again u write amazingly good!!!!

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

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2 posted 06-18-2010 01:33 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Beautiful!
AlexandriaDixon
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3 posted 06-22-2010 01:43 PM       View Profile for AlexandriaDixon   Email AlexandriaDixon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AlexandriaDixon

I didn't know I wasn't strong
until you dared perfect me.

I think this was my favorite line.  This was beautifully written.
mozart4321
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4 posted 07-01-2010 02:32 PM       View Profile for mozart4321   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mozart4321

very sweet and heartwarming. with a dash of melancholy.
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