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Teen Poetry #9

I Return to Purple Mountains

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2010-05-30 08:25 PM

My skin is tingling
Thinking of my life
Nights pass in the blink of an eye
And days mock me
Hours become seconds to my mind

I say my goodbyes,
Prepare for a thousand new hellos
Love how can I leave you?
How can I step out and go?
It seems surreal, like a dream

Will I wake in a moment?
Discoving years that never exsisted?
I go on to new love
The mountains in the dessert
That you've never known

My birth place is calling my name
"Amanda..." it whispers to me
Pulling as only purple mountains do
The valleys and brooks haunting my memory
Invading my very dreams

"Amanda..." you plead
"Don't leave me..." my heart breaks

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

Danny Roberts
New Member

since 2010-05-30

Posts 8

1 posted 2010-05-31 01:42 AM

Its sad, but at the same time calm and peaceful...

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2010-06-04 10:05 PM

Great poem! So Great, it took my breath away. I just want to keep reading it over and over again. Good job!!!

"When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car"
- Unknown

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