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Danny Roberts
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since 2010-05-30
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0 posted 2010-05-30 04:33 PM



And So I sit in my Abyss

With worlds of thought on fire

Trapped by truths of iron

And the greatness of the fire

The flames do circle round and round

Do keep me in this world

As sparks of thought torment my soul

Assault the Vassal that is me

And do smile as its writhes’ and heaves

At depths of pain my spirit breathes

And so my mind

Like wicked match

Does cast my soul alight

The peaceful mist of Nostalgia

So pleasant and alright

Does catch alight

To kill my dreams tonight

The wicked fires do burn and scorch

Do Eat away at me

Until nothing left inside of me,

Can fry or burn or feel

Thy body seems so fine to all

For I am fine out here…

No smoke is seen to give them fear

No flames will fill their sight

For the smoke does dwell inside of me

To kill and cloud my lungs

And flames do burn my soul you see…

And I think they’re almost done

© Copyright 2010 Danny Roberts - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2010-05-30 08:04 PM


Kinda horrifying . . . . in a good way. Welcome, Danny, nice to finally see you on here. I'm sure Robertson pushed you huh?

-Kate

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2010-05-30 08:46 PM


Welcome to Passions!

It sounds as if you are already surrounded
by those who might be well aware of your
talents...

so I look forward to reading more from you.

Please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Danny Roberts
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since 2010-05-30
Posts 8

3 posted 2010-05-31 01:06 AM


Hi Kate. No I asked him.
That being said, I don't think I know anything about you *is intrigued*

Danny Roberts
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since 2010-05-30
Posts 8

4 posted 2010-05-31 01:07 AM


Also: Talents? I put my emotional hell hole of a life on a page and call it a day. Please take my talent, I'll take a nice little house and a normal life any day.
toriber
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since 2010-06-10
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texas
5 posted 2010-06-11 12:44 PM


i total can relate to this it is really good i look foward to reading more
Zaineb
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since 2009-05-22
Posts 27
Denmark
6 posted 2010-06-20 12:00 PM


I really like it, it was something very special
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