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Fires, Flames and Cinders

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Danny Roberts
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0 posted 05-30-2010 04:33 PM       View Profile for Danny Roberts   Email Danny Roberts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Roberts


And So I sit in my Abyss

With worlds of thought on fire

Trapped by truths of iron

And the greatness of the fire

The flames do circle round and round

Do keep me in this world

As sparks of thought torment my soul

Assault the Vassal that is me

And do smile as its writhes’ and heaves

At depths of pain my spirit breathes

And so my mind

Like wicked match

Does cast my soul alight

The peaceful mist of Nostalgia

So pleasant and alright

Does catch alight

To kill my dreams tonight

The wicked fires do burn and scorch

Do Eat away at me

Until nothing left inside of me,

Can fry or burn or feel

Thy body seems so fine to all

For I am fine out here…

No smoke is seen to give them fear

No flames will fill their sight

For the smoke does dwell inside of me

To kill and cloud my lungs

And flames do burn my soul you see…

And I think they’re almost done
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 06-11-2007
Posts 1062
In Love <3


1 posted 05-30-2010 08:04 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Kinda horrifying . . . . in a good way. Welcome, Danny, nice to finally see you on here. I'm sure Robertson pushed you huh?

-Kate

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 05-30-2010 08:46 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Welcome to Passions!

It sounds as if you are already surrounded
by those who might be well aware of your
talents...

so I look forward to reading more from you.

Please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Danny Roberts
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3 posted 05-31-2010 01:06 AM       View Profile for Danny Roberts   Email Danny Roberts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Roberts

Hi Kate. No I asked him.
That being said, I don't think I know anything about you *is intrigued*
Danny Roberts
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4 posted 05-31-2010 01:07 AM       View Profile for Danny Roberts   Email Danny Roberts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Roberts

Also: Talents? I put my emotional hell hole of a life on a page and call it a day. Please take my talent, I'll take a nice little house and a normal life any day.
toriber
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since 06-10-2010
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texas


5 posted 06-11-2010 12:44 PM       View Profile for toriber   Email toriber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for toriber

i total can relate to this it is really good i look foward to reading more
Zaineb
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Denmark


6 posted 06-20-2010 12:00 PM       View Profile for Zaineb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zaineb

I really like it, it was something very special
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