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Without Words

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


0 posted 05-29-2010 12:32 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX



You'd think that words never die,
that at least I'd have some thoughts,
but standing in this field alone,
my trust begins to rot.

A field full of empty thoughts,
pages blank and torn,
will the words never come?
Am I left alone?

I've waited for your company,
tried so hard to rest,
pondered on the things I feel,
but am I at my best?

I used to say so many things,
words helped me through.
But now I feel so out of it..
my sky is never blue.

Living in this field,
empty and alone,
will the words never come,
will I ever feel at home..

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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1 posted 05-29-2010 11:04 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Yay! It's been a while since I've read one of your poems that rhymed. It was pretty good. And I know the feeling. I've been kind of museless lately when it comes to writing. >_<  
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 05-29-2010 07:12 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I feel this. I'm about to go through it. It played upon my bleeding heart strings. I don't know whether to thank you or curse you lol. Good write!

-Kate

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


3 posted 05-29-2010 10:19 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

hahaha. thank you both for your comments.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

mozart4321
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4 posted 07-01-2010 02:52 PM       View Profile for mozart4321   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mozart4321

very good!!  im sure many of us have been there before.  
 
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