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HersheyKiss
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since 06-02-2008
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New Jersey


0 posted 05-25-2010 03:05 PM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HersheyKiss

Hey, I'm back for a little. Here's a new poem, it's definitely not one of my best.  Please let me know what you think.

Her eyes were bloodshot
She had been crying for days
How could she ever love him
He had hurt her in so many ways
He'd come in drunk
And she was the only one there
With no one else to turn to
He'd beat her with not one care
She tried to hide the hurt and pain
Everyday she pretended to be ok
But when he got home
It was the same thing day after day
She loved him so she never told a soul
She used make up to cover the black eyes
Not knowing who to tell or what to do
Everyday she tells more lies
She lies to the world just for one man
This man that hurts her and makes her sad
But this man means a lot to her
This man is her dad
Her dad drinks and beats her till he feels better
Her dad comes into her room with anger everynight
Leaving her in a bloody mess sometimes
Leaving her praying everything will be alright.
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Zaineb
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1 posted 06-20-2010 12:05 PM       View Profile for Zaineb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zaineb

Amazing story. Few words said so much. I really enjoy reading this... Hope for more, very soon.
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2 posted 06-21-2010 12:24 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

simply stunning honey!
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