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When times get hard I say a prayer
That one day I'll wish for air
And see it vanish from my lung
While I keep quiet. Hold my tongue.

For life isn't what they say
As you go along your day
To find yourself broken in the dust
While passers by let you rust

I might be bitter and so strain
Sometimes i ignore the pain
But when i feel insecure
I  wish again for something pure

For in my past I have sin
Fell down times.loss not win.
But tell me when your in that dust
How can you never rust?
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Something about oil and polishing to avoid rust.

Beautifully captured.

“Most men lead lives of quiet desperation and go to the grave with the song still in them.” -Henry David Thoreau

 
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