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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2010-05-24 12:04 PM


Silence

Can you hear it darling?
The majesty resounding
Drums echo in their might
And songs raise up the dawn

Can you hear it darling?
The laughter of the Saints
The cry of joy up leaping!
Dance with the friends of God

Can you hear it darling?
As the promise of the dawn
Rises with the morning
To our new and pleasant song

I whispered in the silence
And felt her warm embrace
I heard the day-bells chiming
As hope grew upon her face


Discipline is remembering what you want.
-David Cambell

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2010-05-30 09:58 AM


One of the most lovely things I've ever heard. I can't wait until the words stand complete.

-Kate

Rawr!!!!! (That means "I love you" in Dinosaur) :)

Octave
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since 2008-07-29
Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.
2 posted 2010-06-01 03:28 PM


Simple, elegant and beautifully executed. Really enjoyed this. Uplifting.
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