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Vulpine
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 20
Minnesota

0 posted 2010-05-20 09:23 PM


The mirror shatters
and the glass comes down

My soul is lost
and not found

I am left in the dark
I make no sound
Waiting for someone to come around

Waiting for someone to put me back on my feet
Waiting for an angel to meet

I Will soon believe again
Miricles do happen and end
I will one day stand
With my soul in place
Looking up to that great place

© Copyright 2010 Emi B. Opheim - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2010-05-21 10:21 AM


"I am left in the dark
I make no sound"

WOW! sweet first post! I look forward to more

-Kate<3


"What are you!?"
"I'm complicated."

toriber
Junior Member
since 2010-06-10
Posts 22
texas
2 posted 2010-06-11 12:56 PM


wow very intence!!! i love this poem great first post!! cant wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
samanthabridget323
New Member
since 2010-09-25
Posts 2

3 posted 2010-09-25 07:39 AM


this is really good i loved it
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2010-09-25 07:35 PM


Yes, you will.

For I have know those who could,
and did, and never looked back
and never sorrowed for themselves...

and proved themselves to Be.

Be strong
Belong
Be proud

Welcome to Passions!

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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

Vulpine
Junior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 20
Minnesota
5 posted 2010-09-26 05:24 PM


Thanks everybody
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
6 posted 2011-01-04 10:59 PM


great work

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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