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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-05-20 05:05 PM


I wonder what would happen
if I were to lose you?

I wonder if you died,
teardrops flowing from my eyes.

I wonder if I'd stare,
too shocked to even think to care.

I'd like to think that I
wouldn't break, and wouldn't cry,

'Til there was no one else around,
No one else to hear the sound,
of my tears.

I wonder what would happen
if I were to lose you?

I wonder if I'd scream,
as the pain spilled out in streams.

I wonder if I'd know
that this time was your time to go.

I'd like to not act wrong;
I'd be brave and kind and strong
through my fears.

I'd like to think,
but cannot know
the path I'd choose;
the way I'd go.

And so until
that day is here,
I'll laugh and smile
until the tears.

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

© Copyright 2010 Melissa ReneĆ© Axtell - All Rights Reserved
whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
1 posted 2010-05-21 03:10 AM


Liked to positive ending...good job...ww
toriber
Junior Member
since 2010-06-10
Posts 22
texas
2 posted 2010-06-16 11:43 AM


wow that reminds me of the way i feel about a few people wow that is so goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

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