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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-05-13 07:38 PM


The song of my heart;
the tune of the sea;
the ebb and the swell
that will bring you to me.

With tears in my eyes
and a heart on my sleeve
as I stare at the ocean
where I saw you leave.

The spray of the sea
and the winds quiet wail
keep soft, gentle rhyme
as I count down the time
of our half-way farewell.

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

© Copyright 2010 Melissa ReneĆ© Axtell - All Rights Reserved
whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
1 posted 2010-05-13 08:14 PM


Heartfelt and well written..good job
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