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In The Darkness Of The Night

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Leanne <3
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N.S.W, Australia


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He had the softest hands
I swear i'd ever felt,
The brownest of all eyes
That made my own just melt.

With passioned lust leading us
Our desires came undone,
And in the darkness of the night
Our bodies moved as one.

Days grew into weeks
Then came the thought of you,
well at first it sure did scare me
and i wished it was untrue.

But then i felt a flutter
Echoeing deep inside,
It synced straight to my heartbeat
And erased the tears i'd cried.

I didn't think it possible
To love someone i'd never met
But i knew already i'd die for you;
Give up everything without regret.

I'd waited with anticipation
Dreaming of what you'd be like;
your laugh, your eyes, your dimpled cheeks,
Would we be anything alike?

But just as i'd felt you flutter
On that warm summers day
In the darkness of the night,
I felt you slip away.

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years Thomas Har

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whisperingwalt
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1 posted 05-13-2010 08:29 PM       View Profile for whisperingwalt   Email whisperingwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for whisperingwalt

nice read...I hate when it slips away too.ww
rebelangelv
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2 posted 05-15-2010 08:54 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

oh my god...that was amazing.. *teardrop*

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

broken_smile1469
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3 posted 05-16-2010 01:19 AM       View Profile for broken_smile1469   Email broken_smile1469   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for broken_smile1469

amazing!
Leanne <3
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4 posted 05-16-2010 06:45 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

Thankyou, i sort of tiptoed my way through this one so i wasnt sure how it would turn out but thanks for your comments
 
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