In The Darkness Of The Night

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Teen Poetry #9

In The Darkness Of The Night

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

0 posted 2010-05-13 12:04 PM

He had the softest hands
I swear i'd ever felt,
The brownest of all eyes
That made my own just melt.

With passioned lust leading us
Our desires came undone,
And in the darkness of the night
Our bodies moved as one.

Days grew into weeks
Then came the thought of you,
well at first it sure did scare me
and i wished it was untrue.

But then i felt a flutter
Echoeing deep inside,
It synced straight to my heartbeat
And erased the tears i'd cried.

I didn't think it possible
To love someone i'd never met
But i knew already i'd die for you;
Give up everything without regret.

I'd waited with anticipation
Dreaming of what you'd be like;
your laugh, your eyes, your dimpled cheeks,
Would we be anything alike?

But just as i'd felt you flutter
On that warm summers day
In the darkness of the night,
I felt you slip away.

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

1 posted 2010-05-13 08:29 PM

nice read...I hate when it slips away too.ww

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2010-05-15 08:54 PM

oh my god...that was amazing.. *teardrop*

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

3 posted 2010-05-16 01:19 AM

amazing!

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

4 posted 2010-05-16 06:45 AM

Thankyou, i sort of tiptoed my way through this one so i wasnt sure how it would turn out but thanks for your comments

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