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If You Were Mine

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WaterFairy103
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0 posted 05-09-2010 02:57 AM       View Profile for WaterFairy103   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for WaterFairy103

Youre laughing at a joke you made,
I smile and roll my eyes.
You say that youre going home,
then you stay here all night.
I wonder, sometimes, if its obvious,
the way my heart speeds up.
When you break into a smooth dance move,
can you tell that Im coming undone?

If you were mine, babe,
Id keep that smile on your face.
Your eyes would smolder with sexy delight
as I settled in your warm embrace.
Id make you laugh all the time,
and be there when you wanted to cry.
Wed go through some of lifes ups and downs,
oh, if only you were mine.

I wonder if you know, sometimes,
the way you make my pulse leap.
You do it so often, youd HAVE to know,
what you do to me physically.
But when we spend a whole day together,
Just doing mundane things
Thats just as powerful to me
as when you make my blood sing.

If you were mine, babe,
Id love you with everything I have.
Id stick with you through thick and thin,
especially when things got bad.
Wed laugh and live and love each other,
maybe not forever, maybe just for a time.
But I would always remember it fondly,
the times that you were mine.

You laugh again at something I say,
and run your fingers through your hair.
Your eyes catch mine, and it gives me hope,
the way they linger there.
I wonder if you ever wonder,
the things I wonder all the time.
I just hope we dont miss out,
because, love, wed be great if you were mine.

Don't take life so seriously.  It's not permanent.

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whisperingwalt
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1 posted 05-09-2010 04:30 PM       View Profile for whisperingwalt   Email whisperingwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for whisperingwalt

Nice longing poem...romantic & sincere..good job.
rebelangelv
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2 posted 05-15-2010 08:58 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

aww i loved it <3

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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