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Candy Coated Misery

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nehematala
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I believe that this poem does not go against the guidelines but if it does I am sorry, feel free to remove it.

Take this black and white rope
Put it around my candy coated misery
And pull it tight
Black and white pictures of my life
Flash before my eyes
And I know
This won't end an eternity of misery
Either to weak to do it
Or to strong to give up
Doesn't matter I'm still here
In this candy coated misery
I smile and say I'll be fine
As a piece of me dies deep down inside
But you won't notice
You never do
I could pull this rope right now
And never be missed
Bu that won't end
My candy coated misery
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1 posted 05-05-2010 09:26 PM       View Profile for broken_smile1469   Email broken_smile1469   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for broken_smile1469

I like it.
WaterFairy103
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I really love this... It's gorgeous.  It's blunt, but kind of subtle at the same time.  = ]  Excellent!

Don't take life so seriously.  It's not permanent.

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3 posted 05-09-2010 11:23 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Nope. Doesn't go against the rules. Since in the poem you chose better by not doing "it." I liked the write.

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4 posted 05-18-2010 05:21 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

Was this talking about suicide? Because if it was, you know I'd just become a necromancer and bring you back as my eternal slave and never stop giving you grief for killing yourself. So, there. Don't even think about it!!!! =0\./0=

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Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)
nehematala
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To late I already thought about it
 
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