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Candy Coated Misery
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Candy Coated Misery |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
I believe that this poem does not go against the guidelines but if it does I am sorry, feel free to remove it. Take this black and white rope Put it around my candy coated misery And pull it tight Black and white pictures of my life Flash before my eyes And I know This won't end an eternity of misery Either to weak to do it Or to strong to give up Doesn't matter I'm still here In this candy coated misery I smile and say I'll be fine As a piece of me dies deep down inside But you won't notice You never do I could pull this rope right now And never be missed Bu that won't end My candy coated misery |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
I like it.  |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
I really love this... It's gorgeous. It's blunt, but kind of subtle at the same time. = ] Excellent! Don't take life so seriously. It's not permanent. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Nope. Doesn't go against the rules. Since in the poem you chose better by not doing "it." I liked the write. -Zach |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Was this talking about suicide? Because if it was, you know I'd just become a necromancer and bring you back as my eternal slave and never stop giving you grief for killing yourself. So, there. Don't even think about it!!!! =0\./0= ~UNTAMEDelegance Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown) |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
To late I already thought about it |
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