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Succumbing To The Dark Side

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Leanne <3
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In this tight cocoon Iíve built

Hide secrets I cannot tell

Ones that will break your heart

And send my own to hell


In this blanket of denial

Iíve worked so hard to weave

Rest memories of yesterday

Through eyes that were once naÔve


I spun the silk to no return

I more than sealed the deal

I threw away my innocence;

now.


Iím on the kill.

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years Ė Thomas Har

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Love this.. nice right Lea..
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love the metaphor and contrasts
Leanne <3
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Thankyou didn't turn out quite like i wanted it to but the general idea was there
 
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