Succumbing To The Dark Side

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Teen Poetry #9

Succumbing To The Dark Side

Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

0 posted 2010-05-02 10:42 PM

In this tight cocoon I’ve built

Hide secrets I cannot tell

Ones that will break your heart

And send my own to hell

In this blanket of denial

I’ve worked so hard to weave

Rest memories of yesterday

Through eyes that were once naïve

I spun the silk to no return

I more than sealed the deal

I threw away my innocence;

now.

I’m on the kill.

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2010-05-04 07:28 PM

Love this.. nice right Lea..

Rosie_Orange
Junior Member

since 2009-04-20

Posts 46
South Africa

2 posted 2010-05-11 12:08 PM

love the metaphor and contrasts

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

3 posted 2010-05-13 10:19 PM

Thankyou

didn't turn out quite like i wanted it to but the general idea was there

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