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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2010-05-02 07:43 PM


Hey so its been a long time since I last posted. Here's a new poem for I wrote for my mama. Please let me know what you think.

Missing Mama:

I awake each morning to start a new day
But the pain of losing you never goes away.
I go about the things I have to do
And as the hours pass I think again of you.
I want to call you and just hear your voice
Then I remember that I have no choice
For you are not there and now my heart cries
Just to see you again to tell you goodbye
To say Mama I love you and I always will
And hope that much of you, in me you've instilled.
The day that you left I just didn't know
That you were going where I couldn't go.
And now all my memories of you are so dear
But gosh, how I miss you and wish you were here.
Who now can hear me when I need to cry?
It so hard to tell you "Mama goodbye."
Someday I know all will be well
And I'll see you again with stories to tell
Of how you were missed and how we have grown
And how good it is to finally be home.
Until then my memories of you I'll keep near
And I'll pass them on to those who are dear.
I miss you Mama

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Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25
Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia
1 posted 2010-05-02 10:03 PM


simply beautiful!!
im sorry for your loss
-Lee

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2010-05-03 07:14 PM


Beautiful write, it's lovely.   
it made me cry.

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nehematala
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since 2009-05-21
Posts 129

3 posted 2010-05-03 08:22 PM


sorry for your loss. If you need someone to talk to I know what your going through.
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