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Was inspired by Emilie Autumn's song, What If. Some lines won't make sense to some. But over all this is basically me. Enjoy?

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Take a glance and make believe
That I'm everything you perceive
Yet I'm different and insecure
What if I'm the disease to your cure?

What if I was the unexpected?
Something lying undetected
Under your scope. Icy cold
Struggling under what I'm told

You have me figured out
So sure what I'm about
What if I'm everything your not?
The truths afraid to be sought

What if I'm the unexplained?
What if I'm unholy and profaned?
Would you care to share your love
To know that your much higher up above?

Would take a seat and chat
About what I think about this and that
Please don't think I'm bland
Would you take the time to understand?
© Copyright 2010 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-28-2010 01:32 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

What if I'm the disease to your cure?

Good thoughts in this poem, and it is funny how we can be so "down in the dumps" then someone comes along and brings us back to reality.  That is what love (all kinds) is.
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"What if I'm the unexplained?
What if I'm unholy and profaned?
Would you care to share your love
To know that your much higher up above?"

a feeling im so familiar with!!
great write as always Zach  
-Lee
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3 posted 05-09-2010 11:36 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

You're right Mys.

Thanks Leanne for always reading my poems. And having delightful comments for them.

-Zach
 
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