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hunnie_girl
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I need you more than ever
I wish I was in your arms
with you holding me
im safe from life's harms

but it time to do some walking
cos its just the whiskey talking

you've never looked so good
as you do right tonight
lost in this moment
nothing feels so right

but it time to do some walking
cos its just the whiskey talking

I miss those nights
fighting in the rain
yelling in anger
how you drove me insane

but it time to do some walking
cos its just the whiskey talking

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1 posted 04-23-2010 08:59 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Whoaa I can really relate..
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Hi Hunnie,

In all honesty this reminded me a lot of a country song, or two. It could be because I've been listening to Lady Antebellum, and Reba McEntire for the last few days.

I do understand the sentiment behind it, and can relate. Thanks for sharing.

Stargal
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I really like this
WaterFairy103
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4 posted 05-09-2010 03:01 AM       View Profile for WaterFairy103   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WaterFairy103

Hunnie! I love this!  It's so sad...  But it shows an inner strength at the same time, the ability to admit that it's just the whiskey talking.  = ]  Excellent write.

Don't take life so seriously.  It's not permanent.

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love it
 
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