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This is how I feel when I'm depressed. Its confusing to me as well as anyone who reads this. But this is me. or.. is it really me?

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I see twisted faces.
looming grins.
I hear their laughter.
yet I don't understand.
This place looks familiar.
But its oh so derange.
I understand its complexity.
I feel normal yet very strange.
Its hard to describe yet I know it well.
Where am I? Who is that in the mirror?
My mind and body aren't in sync.
I don't know who I am anymore.
Holding onto pieces of old me.
I fear I can't be my old self.
I fear I won't ever really be.
I feel trapped but mind is free.
I still don't understand.
I thought I sunken to my low
But I realized I'm on level one
Infinite amount before I'm gone
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Its not really confusing
Everything seems different when you are depressed even if it seems familiar.

I see twisted faces.
looming grins.
I hear their laughter.
yet I don't understand.

I completely get this part its how I feel right now, I don't understand why they can be happy and not me or even really why they are happy.

Best of luck
Michelle
 
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