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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 04-15-2010 06:23 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

So this was an english assignment at school. We were supposed to write a poem based on a route we take to a place, or used to take to go somewhere. I couldn't think of any that were of significance, so I wrote a figurative/imaginative route that I took once upon a time.

As I start my journey
to a place I once knew,
I'm reminded of my memories
and how they keep me going.

The road is long and narrow,
I'm not sure if I can make it.
Hardships come and hardships go,
I pray they'll make me stronger.

I see the end is arriving
as I look back on my past.
Should I continue...
or hover in my fear..?

I will move on and greet the light with joy.
In the end we will conquer,
in the end we will live on,
and we will fear no more.

As I arrive I say 'goodbye'
to my life as it was,
and say 'hello' to how it will be,
while I walk - finally home.


julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell
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1 posted 04-15-2010 10:33 PM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd

what garde did you get this is good id give you and A++++
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 04-15-2010 10:35 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

haha, thanks.
it wasn't for marks, just a warm-up assignment for the rest of our class while learning the deeper insights of poetry.

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

nehematala
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3 posted 04-19-2010 10:26 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

This is really good.
I like that you took the topic and put a different twist on it
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