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My mind goes blank

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Bailey
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since 04-09-2010
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Georgia, US


0 posted 04-09-2010 08:47 PM       View Profile for Bailey   Email Bailey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bailey

No clue how to write it in the meter.
Can not flow as the buzzing of the bees.
Should it be about a man named Peter?
Or the puppy's companion fleas on me?

Writing sonnets have messed up my thinking!
Have I no talent for the masster piece?
My thoughts disapear as if deleting.
this is messing up my personal peace!

Poetry police are taking me away
This writng has shamed the art of poetry.
Coming to take me away today.
This ends my career and salary.

Forever to be my last sonnet,
No more to ever make you vomit


ha i got a brain fart when i sat down to do my lit. homewrok and this sonnet is the result. I think I should turn it in, do you?

Bailey

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 07-30-2009
Posts 369
New Orleans


1 posted 04-16-2010 03:38 AM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet

I would.
nehematala
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2 posted 04-19-2010 10:18 PM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

yep
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