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Bailey
Junior Member
since 2010-04-09
Posts 12
Georgia, US

0 posted 2010-04-09 08:47 PM


No clue how to write it in the meter.
Can not flow as the buzzing of the bees.
Should it be about a man named Peter?
Or the puppy's companion fleas on me?

Writing sonnets have messed up my thinking!
Have I no talent for the masster piece?
My thoughts disapear as if deleting.
this is messing up my personal peace!

Poetry police are taking me away
This writng has shamed the art of poetry.
Coming to take me away today.
This ends my career and salary.

Forever to be my last sonnet,
No more to ever make you vomit


ha i got a brain fart when i sat down to do my lit. homewrok and this sonnet is the result. I think I should turn it in, do you?

Bailey

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
1 posted 2010-04-16 03:38 AM


I would.
nehematala
Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129

2 posted 2010-04-19 10:18 PM


yep
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