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WaterFairy103
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0 posted 04-07-2010 03:36 AM       View Profile for WaterFairy103   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for WaterFairy103


I want to go to a movie
and laugh out loud.
Blend in,
and then stand out in the crowd.
Do something dangerous
with someone I love.
Find out what I'm really made of.

I want to dance
with a bolt of lightning.
Take a punch,
then go down fighting.
Flirt with a boy,
run like the wind.
Try to find myself again.

Make big mistakes
and brush them off.
Break down crying,
then stand up tall.
Hold onto a stranger,
fall asleep in his arms.
Finally have someone succumb to my charms.

Write a song
that changes a life.
Lay on a beach,
learn to fly a kite.
Have a lunch date,
laugh with some friends.
Go somewhere I've never been.

Make someone feel cherished,
steal someone's breath.
I don't want to tiptoe through life,
only to arrive safely at death.
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kjsd
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1 posted 04-08-2010 08:44 PM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd

this is a very good poem i loved it
Raquel :]
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2 posted 04-10-2010 10:40 PM       View Profile for Raquel :]   Email Raquel :]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Raquel :]

Wow! oh & you dont have to worry about the
takeing someones breath away thing anymore
because you just stole mine with your poem :]
ha if that makes any sense..
Leanne <3
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3 posted 04-11-2010 01:44 AM       View Profile for Leanne <3   Email Leanne <3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Leanne <3

such an amazing poem, something i think most people can relate to
great job
-Lee
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4 posted 05-09-2010 03:03 AM       View Profile for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Email N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet

I liked the end, even if that's a bit morbid.

Good luck.

Beautifully Captured.

"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."

"Hold faithfulness and sincerity as first principles."

-Confucius

Rosie_Orange
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5 posted 05-09-2010 04:46 AM       View Profile for Rosie_Orange   Email Rosie_Orange   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosie_Orange

so true!! why live life with a shadow over yourself when you can live it to the fullest
i really liked it!
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6 posted 05-09-2010 11:38 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Absolutely love this! Definitely going into my library.

Keep up the great writes.

-Zach
WaterFairy103
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7 posted 05-09-2010 12:08 PM       View Profile for WaterFairy103   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WaterFairy103

Thank you so much, everyone!  I was kind of worried about posting this one, since it's so unlike any of the other poems I write... But it was definitely worth it!  = ] Thanks for all the encouragement!

In my next life, I'm going to be a ghost.

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