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UNTAMEDelegance
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0 posted 2010-03-26 09:15 PM


I slowly come to terms with facts.
There is no "our" or "we."
There is no "us," no "me and him"
and never will there be.

I slowly nurse the throbbing loss.
It hurts too much to see.
I'm blinded 'cause there is no "us"
and now it's only me.

I slowly stand against the wounds.
I'll face this on my own.
I don't need them; can't show the pain.
I'll bleed and cry alone...

[This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (03-27-2010 01:18 PM).]

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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 2010-03-27 05:15 PM


I've been there, it sux. Nice write, though.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

UNTAMEDelegance
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2 posted 2010-03-27 05:45 PM


Thanks. Goos to know I'm not the only one...
                               ~UNTAMEDelegance

Nothing is more painful that realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

nehematala
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3 posted 2010-05-18 02:22 AM


messa I'll always be there for you when you need to talk
whisperingwalt
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4 posted 2010-05-18 02:52 AM


...and sadness shall turn to joy
   when time has passed
   and she has forgottened the boy
   who never deserved
   to be loved gently
   by the caring girl
   who dared to walk
   Out on the limb.

   My your healing be quick.ww

[This message has been edited by whisperingwalt (05-19-2010 03:00 AM).]

UNTAMEDelegance
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5 posted 2010-05-18 11:06 AM


Thank you. Thank you so much whisperingwalt. You don't know how much it means to me to hear someone say that. It... it's like hearing a waterfall that falls down and washes away the sting of the pain; it's like the aloe vera to my burned heart. Thank you.

         ~UNTAMEDelegance

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

UNTAMEDelegance
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6 posted 2010-05-18 05:18 PM


Michelle,
   There are some things I need to face alone...

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

toriber
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since 2010-06-10
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7 posted 2010-06-17 12:08 PM


wow iv totally been there i hope everything turns out good for you!!

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

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8 posted 2010-06-18 01:36 AM


DANGGIT! Man this was good Loved it!!
UNTAMEDelegance
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9 posted 2010-06-22 03:53 PM


Thank you! =^.^=

               ~UNTAMEDelegance

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

mozart4321
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10 posted 2010-07-01 02:46 PM


wow.   you have talent.
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