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UNTAMEDelegance
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0 posted 03-26-2010 09:15 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

I slowly come to terms with facts.
There is no "our" or "we."
There is no "us," no "me and him"
and never will there be.

I slowly nurse the throbbing loss.
It hurts too much to see.
I'm blinded 'cause there is no "us"
and now it's only me.

I slowly stand against the wounds.
I'll face this on my own.
I don't need them; can't show the pain.
I'll bleed and cry alone...

[This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (03-27-2010 01:18 PM).]

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1 posted 03-27-2010 05:15 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I've been there, it sux. Nice write, though.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

UNTAMEDelegance
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2 posted 03-27-2010 05:45 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

Thanks. Goos to know I'm not the only one...
                               ~UNTAMEDelegance

Nothing is more painful that realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

nehematala
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3 posted 05-18-2010 02:22 AM       View Profile for nehematala   Email nehematala   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nehematala

messa I'll always be there for you when you need to talk
whisperingwalt
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4 posted 05-18-2010 02:52 AM       View Profile for whisperingwalt   Email whisperingwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for whisperingwalt

...and sadness shall turn to joy
   when time has passed
   and she has forgottened the boy
   who never deserved
   to be loved gently
   by the caring girl
   who dared to walk
   Out on the limb.

   My your healing be quick.ww

[This message has been edited by whisperingwalt (05-19-2010 03:00 AM).]

UNTAMEDelegance
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5 posted 05-18-2010 11:06 AM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

Thank you. Thank you so much whisperingwalt. You don't know how much it means to me to hear someone say that. It... it's like hearing a waterfall that falls down and washes away the sting of the pain; it's like the aloe vera to my burned heart. Thank you.

         ~UNTAMEDelegance

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

UNTAMEDelegance
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6 posted 05-18-2010 05:18 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

Michelle,
   There are some things I need to face alone...

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)
toriber
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7 posted 06-17-2010 12:08 PM       View Profile for toriber   Email toriber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for toriber

wow iv totally been there i hope everything turns out good for you!!

id rather be extordinary together rather than ordinary a part

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8 posted 06-18-2010 01:36 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

DANGGIT! Man this was good Loved it!!
UNTAMEDelegance
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9 posted 06-22-2010 03:53 PM       View Profile for UNTAMEDelegance   Email UNTAMEDelegance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for UNTAMEDelegance

Thank you! =^.^=

               ~UNTAMEDelegance

Nothing is more painful than realizing he meant everything to you, but you meant nothing to him. (Unknown)

mozart4321
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10 posted 07-01-2010 02:46 PM       View Profile for mozart4321   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mozart4321

wow.   you have talent.
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