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Teen Poetry #9

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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2010-03-24 08:07 PM

spider. Just felt like writing about nature.
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Spin the web
With lofty lines
Silver moonlit tears
glide upon their vines

Dip the brush
And paint away
A story; another spell
To entrance while at bay

Wear a mask
And fool the very fly
For they not know better
Then to believe your lies

You weave a web
And hold your dreams
For bit by bit your web
Will fall apart at the seams

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2010-03-27 05:43 PM

Awesome poem, as usual.

You're way better than me now, Zach!!!

I wish I could write like you.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2010-03-29 02:37 PM

Haha but you're already better then me Christine.

I just whipped this poem off the top of my head to be honest. I didn't know if it would make sense or not. (Most of my poems are just thoughts on my mind at that moment of posting.)

But thank you for your comment Christine! Its always nice to hear from you.

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

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