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spider. Just felt like writing about nature.
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Spin the web
With lofty lines
Silver moonlit tears
glide upon their vines

Dip the brush
And paint away
A story; another spell
To entrance while at bay

Wear a mask
And fool the very fly
For they not know better
Then to believe your lies

You weave a web
And hold your dreams
For bit by bit your web
Will fall apart at the seams



Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.
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Awesome poem, as usual.

You're way better than me now, Zach!!!

I wish I could write like you.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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2 posted 03-29-2010 02:37 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Haha but you're already better then me Christine.

I just whipped this poem off the top of my head to be honest. I didn't know if it would make sense or not. (Most of my poems are just thoughts on my mind at that moment of posting.)

But thank you for your comment Christine! Its always nice to hear from you.

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

 
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